Modification of my Gospel presentation

Ever since my mission trip to Tokyo, Japan, I have been thinking over the way I have presented the glorious Gospel of our Lord Jesus Christ to the Japanese friends and others which I have came into contact with during my trip there. I have since figured out that there is a deficiency in the way I have been presenting the Gospel so far; since in a society like Japan, there is absolutely NO concept of a Creator God who is transcendent, thus the Japanese can't exactly figured out what I was talking about. Of course, I know that even with the modification, it would still be hard but it's the best I could do, and trusting the Holy Spirit to regenerate them and open their eyes to see the Truth. The modificaton I have made is to first proclaim some of the attributes of God first before the truth about the Creation event, and you can see my modified Gospel presetation here.